So, I'm writing a proposal for a series grown out of my story, "The Osteomancer's Son."
Among the dramatis personae are the protagonist's ex, Carmen, and their daughter, Miranda.
I named them Carmen. And Miranda.
This wouldn't make me cringe quite as much if they hadn't already appeared in the story, published two years ago.
ETA: Okay, I must be tired. In the story I actually named her Connie. So I was only about to introduce new error rather than repeat existing error.

Among the dramatis personae are the protagonist's ex, Carmen, and their daughter, Miranda.
I named them Carmen. And Miranda.
This wouldn't make me cringe quite as much if they hadn't already appeared in the story, published two years ago.
ETA: Okay, I must be tired. In the story I actually named her Connie. So I was only about to introduce new error rather than repeat existing error.


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Okay, actually, I just checked. Somewhere I must've realized what I was doing and changed her name from Carmen to Connie.
I guess years-ago Greg had right-now Greg's back.
So how was RUSH!!!??
So what happens when Neil makes a mistake? Is it something only a purist would notice, or is it like a trainwreck?
:-)
I smell Hollywood blockbuster! Get me Penelope Cruz's agent!
- yeff
Carmen's sister was named Aurora.